Have We Met Before
Chapter 1
One day in the afternoon. I was walking in the street as a guy pass next to me. We pump into each other , of course i said sorry and so did he as we continue on our path, but then the guy turn around and said out loud " Have we met before ?" I turned around and said "i'm not allowed to tell you that , if we had" i smiled and walk away.
Confused the guy looked at me and said " what a weird one " and then look at the time and runs away................................….………
Main character Girl : Loheal Harmony.
22 years old.
Main character Boy : Danny Fingal
23 years old
Friend : Penny
And others.
Chapter 2
ALARM GOES ON ' I woke up and call Penny as i went to wash my face and teeth . Penny ran into my room with a pen and a book with blank pages she sat on the chair and said
" i'm ready "
as she starts writing in her book chapter 1
" i met a guy "
i said
" name ? "
Penny ask
" danny Fingal, he had black straight hair .Probably taller then me. He was wearing a green ( grass color ) shirt . I was walking in the streets "
i said
" what year ? "
Penny said
" it was like today "
i said
" Today ? "
Penny said
" yes it wasn't in the future and neither in the past "
i said ' Present ' Penny wrote
" and what did he say or ask you ? " Penny said
" he ask ...have we met before ? "
i said
" why would he ask you that ? , Wait ... do you think he.... "
Penny said.
" He dreams about me too. " i said .we looked at each other and then Penny wrote in her book. ' Title : REALITY ' and closed her book.
Very good follow up chapter. Continuity is everything!
Chapter 3
Penny and i went to a coffee place near by our house. When we walk in i saw Danny he works there. Penny went to get her coffee first after she got her coffee she went to get a place for us to sit.
" Hi there, what can i get for you ? " Danny said
" uhm hi hello can i have a frap coffee "
i said nerviously
" nice choice , name "
he said
" Loheal "
i said. He laugh as he writes it down " what's so funny ? "
i said
" it's just that i've dreamt about you once "
Danny said
" oh akward .. what about ? "
i said " that's for me to keep and for you not to know "
Danny said
"awch "
i said
" sorry, was i being rude ? you see i get to be a very mean person when i'm nervious. "
Danny said. i laugh and said
" i'll enjoy this.. "
i said
" this moment ? " Danny interrupt " sure "
i said and walk away
" (chuckles ) what a funny one... hi what can i get for you
" Danny said.
I sat next to Penny
" that guy is funny "
i said
" yeah he's funny and cute "
Penny said
" and the guy of todays dream "
i said. Penny looked at me
" no way "
she said. i laugh and drink my coffee and said
" yup " .
Penny took her coffee and stood up " what are you doing?! "
i said . As fast as i could i took our bags and my coffee and pull penny out of the place before she shout something.
'outside '
" are you crazy ?, there are rules "
i said
" oh i'm sorry i didn't know "
Penny said
"let's get some donuts"
i said as we walk away .
" (chuckles) What a weird one " Danny said looking outside.
Great teaser start! Well done.